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selenak ([personal profile] selenak) wrote in [personal profile] cahn 2020-01-19 04:46 pm (UTC)

Re: Toppings of all types, continued - the Curious Case of the Recurring Favourite

Thank you for the translation! While I think Fritz is entirely capable of inventing STDs, it makes for a more dramatic reveal if Marwitz was, in fact, plagued by them. (It also makes Fritz' actions a bit more ambiguous, which is always more interesting.) Speaking of interesting, something like this makes me realize I prefer my Heinrich characterisation recalling that being Fritz' other self also involves having his own capacity for anger, pettiness and above all retaliation, as opposed to being written solely as a victim.

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